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it's like she has very by ~cattieloves:iconcattieloves:

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it's like she has very colorful tears
but he's not listening anymore
or perhaps he is listening still he just
doesn't care now
or maybe never did
and with her innocent heart confused she
set about believing nothing
sinking
more into despair life
sitting heavily upon her
chest

is it any wonder she cannot breathe?

when horribleness engulfs the soul of the frail
young bride
she cannot flee to death for it is death
and she cannot run to her husband
for he does not appear to be who she thought
he was

somebody, save her
not just a(me)rica
but the rest of the world, too
©2008-2009 ~cattieloves
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Narrating my own agony...sounds emo, but whatev. :shrug:

If you'd like to use my work for any reason, please ask first. Thanks! :*)
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~AquaBean:iconAquaBean: Apr 30, 2008, 1:44:21 AM
"it's like she has very colorful tears
but he's not listening anymore"
Wow...very well expressed. :) Like an emotion or situation that should be obvious to the person, but goes unnoticed.

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I never think of the future - it comes soon enough.
-Albert Einstein
=suukei:iconsuukei: Apr 30, 2008, 5:10:36 AM
This is :wow:

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These violent delights have violent ends .....and in their triumph die, like fire and powder, Which, as they kiss, consume.
~cattieloves:iconcattieloves: Apr 30, 2008, 9:44:11 PM
Hey, thank you! It's a small comfort that my hurt can be woven into something beautiful. :*)

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~cattieloves:iconcattieloves: Apr 30, 2008, 9:44:35 PM
Thank you so much! :thanks:

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[link] "Where I come from, there are men who do nothing but good deeds, all day long. They're called phil...phi...phila...good deed doers. And their hearts are no bigger than yours." - The Wizard of Oz
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